Show, Don’t Tell!!

The boy was sad – Warm tears dripped down his cheeks, one salty drop falling in his mouth. His eyes fell to the ground as he stared with sorrow. Aromas of the rain filled his nose. Sobbing and rainfall were the only sounds to be heard on a bitter evening.

The dog wanted to go for a walk – Saliva hit the floor as he stuck his long pink tongue out of his mouth. Loud barks bumped off every wall of the room. Jumping up onto me the dog was so eager to go he couldn’t control himself.

The temperature fell and the ice reflected the sun – Goosebumps engulfed my arms. Chattering teeth was all i could hear.

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